Bittersweet Song

Den Song hab ich mit 16 geschrieben, bei meinem ersten Liebeskummer.
Ist (leider) aktuell wie nie, und ich spiele ihn fast jeden Tag, da das ungemein hilft.
Vielleicht findet sich der/die Eine oder Andere in meinen Worten wieder:

I'm holding on to what I've got left of our memories
I'm trying to wake up, trying to break up, holding on to these
But life isn't lifeless, step out the darkness, how did we get this right?
I'm sorry to be here, sorry for the tears, I'll run off into the night

But I'm alright now, and you are gone, guess we are done
But I feel fine now, I'm getting pushed over the edge
But this is life, and it must move on while I sing along
This bittersweet song, we wrote so long ago

I admit this wasn't an easy ride, we lost the love in between our fights
But I don't have a single regret for all the nights laying on our bed
Listening to the stories we once got to know, and fighting over things we were too young to let go
Just too young to let go

But I'm alright now, yes you are gone, so we are done
But I feel fine now, I'm getting pushed over the edge
But this is life, and it must move on while we sing along
This bittersweet song, we wrote so long ago

I was your cure, while you were my disease
I was saving you, but you were killing me

Yes I'm alright now, so you are gone
And we are done
F*ck, I feel fine now, I'm rising up to bring you down!
This is my life, and I have moved on, no more singing along
This bittersweet song, you wrote so long ago
So long ago
So long ago
So long ago
So long ago
I miss you so


Werde versuchen das in naher Zukunft auch aufzunehmen, das Resultat werde ich dann auch hier Posten.

Hallo Redstone ,

Nicht schlecht , nicht schlecht , solltest weiter schreiben. Ich sehe da Potenzial . .

Gibt andere Texte , wo Ich mir nur * Oh mein Gott , was soll dieses .. * denke .. Aber deiner war nicht schlecht .

Liebe Grüße

Das wäre unheimlich toll, wenn du posten könntest, wie du den Song spielst..
ich liebe Musik und ich bin schon gespannt...
Viel Erfolg und ich freu mich drauf.

Nach langer Abstinenz mal wieder was neues von mir, gerade innerhalb von 45 Minuten geschrieben:

I don't want to vent unnecessarily
As hard times move right past me, I'm still strong and free
My emotions seem useless, as they blur my vision
Am I still part of what you once called hope division?

Will I miss you when I'm gone?
Or will you just fade away?
Tell me where have we gone wrong
And what keeps me, keeps me from moving on?

Piece by piece I'm rebuilding what I used to be
All the time that I've wasted mourning what'll never be
As the rain's pouring down, with the tides having turned
Guess I just flew too high, was I bound to get burned?

Will I miss you when I'm gone?
Or will you just fade away?
Tell me where have we gone wrong
And what keeps me, keeps me from moving on?

Everyone tells me that I deserve better,
Yet Noone is willing to give it to me!
Still struggling hard, coping to forget her,
Where is the light you told me I'd see?
I bent till I broke, only to be thrown away.
Will this be the last time life leads me astray?

Will I miss you when I'm gone?
Or will you just fade away?
Tell me where have we gone wrong
And what keeps me, keeps me from moving on?
Will I miss you when I'm gone?
Will you ever go away?
Will this ever go away?